Tuesday, January 17, 2006

lost magic touch...

this poem is specially for someone who matters a lot to me. i hope the message is well- received.

Lost Magic Touch.

the window opened..
what a perfect scene!
all colours harmoniously mingled
to create a beautiful picture.
soaked in its picturesque setting...
wished to behold it forever.
tried to capture it.

the scene stayed with me.
gave me limitless joy.

how come, only i can see it?
love it? appreciate it?
i thought others were blind..
and it annoyed me.
alas! i was wrong.
the window was no more open.
the winds bound it shut.
the winds of change...
winds forcing people to follow "the direction"-
the right path.

th window does open
only if pains are taken to open it.
but who has the time?
i have...i want to enjoy the beauty.
i want even others to..

trying hard to combat winds of change...
trying to break the window..
the scene needs to be appreciated.

5 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

...... almost the best thing i've ever read so far. gosh.. this has got so many meanings, so many mysteries, so much expression, so much of me!

3:37 pm  
Blogger dusky hues said...

this was for u chintan. u didn't get it??

12:43 pm  
Blogger Unknown said...

yes very well, i got it maam. thats why ive written in my comment 'this got so much of me',
this poem wil remain close to me always. it sends a chill down my spine every time i read it. til now ive read it atleast 8-12 times. im taken aback by ur magic of words.. truly. i dunno how 2 express my grattitude further. im at a looss of words.. thank you maam, thank you!

3:25 pm  
Blogger ruhey said...

it's simply beautiful ma'am,
i loved it.

2:37 am  
Blogger diksha said...

beautiful mam...
everytime i read it, it means different things to me...
you r so cool

1:21 am  

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