Saturday, December 17, 2005

Future Aborted

Shattered expectations lay all over
Whats more its all over
The radiance, the ray of hope.
The anxious waiting..all shattered in a minute.
In a minute, six months of waiting ..
lost forever the seeds of future.

All penance, all sacrifices, all pain
gone..leaving a void forever.
The pains were sweet when hope was there
But now it is a unbearable ache..
The pain endured ..to see the seeds of love grow
was life itself...
The loss of pain is not..its death.

Six months of pain, just three months were to pass
They didn't pass...
Instead there is a pain for life.
An aborted future.

4 Comments:

Blogger Eroteme said...

Touching post. I like the way you say: The pains were sweet when hope was there

So maybe it is not the pain that aches but hope does.

2:40 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

hey..i am so delighted that u read my poem. this is the best birthday gift for me.
yes its the hope that aches...makes us see rays where none exist.
hope to see u often.

3:48 PM  
Blogger Anorion said...

AMAZING PARALLELS! this one is masterpiece.
Yeah the point where you lose hope hurts a lot.

9:01 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

this poem is very close to my heart...
hopelessness of a dear one inspired this poem and "death of my life"

5:03 PM  

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