Wednesday, March 08, 2006

Rooted Wings

The dawn beckons with tantalising
rays of hope.
Mirroring the explosive, fast-spreading desire
My wings look up at the sky...
fluttering wildly with imagined happiness.
The naughty wind adds to
the exciting pace of surging desire
to burst with life.. the moment of ecstasy.

The sky and me are made for each other.
Winged, i try to reach for the ultimate union...
Up and up, the wind supports..
But the roots are deeply buried
Secure roots hold me back
strangle the upsurging desires final leap
till they fizz out and lie lifeless

Flights of fancy allowed once in a while
a quick glimpse of the rosy sky
to quench the deep desires
..of rooted wings.


Blogger jocklohm junction said...

gr8 expression... :)

1:39 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

great u liked it.
its just a spontaneous work.
keep visiting.

2:10 PM  
Blogger ~GiFt oF GoDhEaD~ said...

The atmosphere created is beautiful!
I simplay love the poem!:)

4:43 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

hey sye,
great that u loved it. it is a little different from my other works i think.
keep visiting.

9:11 AM  
Blogger filter kaapi said...

the entire ambience is awesome. i particularly liked
Mirroring the explosive, fast-spreading desire..fluttering wildly with imagined happiness!

m commentin on ur blog after a long time.

12:35 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

happy that u liked it. i thought the overdose of poems put u off.
happy to have u back.
keep visiting.

10:37 PM  
Blogger Nisha Talreja said...

nice poems...i also have one more site where i have written wordings and where i have written a book. kindly go thru these sites. and yes we can b friends.

2:48 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

hey nisha..
nice to see another nisha. thanx for ur inputs.. would love meeting like minded people...

8:56 PM  

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