Saturday, October 07, 2006

___________________

They pull you into a
whirlpool of delusions
Never letting you rest in peace
You can never be
the old you anymore
As you keep pushing the envelope
Alittle further
Athinking mind and a restless heart
obviously a fatal twosome...

After visualising the world of impossible
Who can settle for something lesser?
Delay only makes life seem
like an inane drag...
Whipping wishes wound...
But you are never cured of delusions
Hope of achieving the impossible
adds salt and pepper to the whip lash

Beware!
Dreams are dangerous

7 Comments:

Blogger A Desolated Soul said...

hmm...well i dont have a lot of patience to go through your entire gamut of poems(plz dont take it personaly)...just being loyal to my star sign!LOL! It's obvious tat u have been in love...correct me if i am wrong!

9:22 PM  
Blogger A Desolated Soul said...

hey ..one more thing...thanx a ton for posting your comments on my blog!!
Though i had written all that crap long time back....almost a year now...i still sometimes do tend to lurk around...just when i am going through a low!!!LOL!

9:33 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

hey i understand about the patience bit... guess there r too many poems and on the same damn line of thought...

and about me being in love.. well.. can i deny the obvious??

i think u should continue writing... about anything...

1:19 PM  
Blogger A Desolated Soul said...

Hey why doesn't your blog alow anonymous comments....tats not fair ...

2:05 PM  
Blogger A Desolated Soul said...

infact when i first stumbled upon your blog....i kinda liked nd so wanted to post comments nd for the same ahhhh ...i had to log on to my blog id...but not before resetting my password LOL!!!!!!had forgotten my password!!

2:08 PM  
Anonymous ashu said...

Athinking mind and a restless heart
obviously a fatal twosome...
....this nailed it for me!!
loved teh simplicity and the brutality which tags along!!

10:45 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

hey ashu...
finally here u are...
looking forward to more comments from u...
happy that u liked it

12:40 PM  

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