Saturday, December 22, 2007

A little more of you...

Turning back...
I decided to leave you alone,
after accepting defeat and giving into
the fact that i failed to
penetrate the inner recesses of your mind
the deepest core of your heart
the hidden essence of your existence...

I lost to you
all that I had
And I knew I was asking for the impossible
But some mad hope
pushed me to take that one last chance -
Of staying and seeing if I could change
the unchangeable reality...

Still, I continue with that one last chance
Hopelessly, resigned to defeat...
But used to the idea of believing
that even your rejection has you in it...

And I take that rejection as a part of you...
because forever I crave a little more of you.

3 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey.......hi! good stuff ....
but i wanna ask you something ..........interesting thoughts though......but are you like only gonna echo pain......or are you disguising pleasure with pain.......coz most of what you poetised here echoes pain .....or maybe i have just got it wrong ..........but anyways i liked a "little more of you" coz i guess it did echo some hope admist all the pain. hey dont get me wrong i aint no pain hater.......i was just cruising ......stopped by to check out this space...found it fun and what i wrote above are just "thoughts" .chow......

1:26 AM  
Blogger Nirvanicyogi said...

Hey.......hi! good stuff ....
but i wanna ask you something ..........interesting thoughts though......but are you like only gonna echo pain......or are you disguising pleasure with pain.......coz most of what you poetised here echoes pain .....or maybe i have just got it wrong ..........but anyways i liked a "little more of you" coz i guess it did echo some hope admist all the pain. hey dont get me wrong i aint no pain hater.......i was just cruising ......stopped by to check out this space...found it fun and what i wrote above are just "thoughts" .chow......

1:27 AM  
Blogger Nirvanicyogi said...

Hey ............hi sorry just a little confusion......posted it twice .......just getting used to blogging ...yet to understand the nuances of it........anyways i guess you can ignore the anonymous dude.......coz i got an ID but the irony is i still remain anonymous.........but hey i guess we all live a thousand faces ......aint we ........chow

1:33 AM  

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