Tuesday, January 17, 2006

lost magic touch...

this poem is specially for someone who matters a lot to me. i hope the message is well- received.

Lost Magic Touch.

the window opened..
what a perfect scene!
all colours harmoniously mingled
to create a beautiful picture.
soaked in its picturesque setting...
wished to behold it forever.
tried to capture it.

the scene stayed with me.
gave me limitless joy.

how come, only i can see it?
love it? appreciate it?
i thought others were blind..
and it annoyed me.
alas! i was wrong.
the window was no more open.
the winds bound it shut.
the winds of change...
winds forcing people to follow "the direction"-
the right path.

th window does open
only if pains are taken to open it.
but who has the time?
i have...i want to enjoy the beauty.
i want even others to..

trying hard to combat winds of change...
trying to break the window..
the scene needs to be appreciated.

8 Comments:

Blogger jocklohm junction said...

...... almost the best thing i've ever read so far. gosh.. this has got so many meanings, so many mysteries, so much expression, so much of me!

3:37 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

this was for u chintan. u didn't get it??

12:43 PM  
Blogger jocklohm junction said...

yes very well, i got it maam. thats why ive written in my comment 'this got so much of me',
this poem wil remain close to me always. it sends a chill down my spine every time i read it. til now ive read it atleast 8-12 times. im taken aback by ur magic of words.. truly. i dunno how 2 express my grattitude further. im at a looss of words.. thank you maam, thank you!

3:25 PM  
Blogger RAMTA JOGI CHALTA PANI said...

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11:18 AM  
Blogger ruhey said...

it's simply beautiful ma'am,
i loved it.

2:37 AM  
Blogger ~GiFt oF GoDhEaD~ said...

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7:38 PM  
Blogger ~GiFt oF GoDhEaD~ said...

Hi Ma'am
this poem has been written very rightly for Chintan.
The poem is very emotional and expressive...frankly ma'am im out of words!!!
lots of love
-Syesha.

7:41 PM  
Blogger sheetal said...

beautiful mam...
everytime i read it, it means different things to me...
you r so cool

1:21 AM  

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