Love
This poem was written way back in 1999 when i was in 11th standard.
Its kiddish but special. hope u enjoy it.
LOVE
Love to me lies in your deep eyes.
Love to me in your intense voice.
Love to me is in your affectionate pat.
Love to me is in your lively chat.
Love to me is in your smile so sweet.
Love to me is in your that mischievous peep.
Love to me is in your every action, sane and insane.
Love to me is in your concern for my gain and pain.
Love to me is in your care and nurture.
Love to me is in your untold promise of the future.
Love to me is lies in whatever you do.
Love to me is you and only you.
6 Comments:
nice...thts the way love to me is n last line "Love to me is you and only you."...apke liye hai true
oye tu bhi poetry-shoetry likh rahi hai!!!
good that u liked it.
u know at that time i hid my poems becoz thought they were childish.
mera toh ek hi philosophy hai, don't undestimate urself...aur mera poetry-shoetry hai toh pls....
maam no offence, but u express pain and suffering with such effortless flair..., whereas 4 this one, it looked like u wer searching for words... 4give me if u feel im wrong, bt thats just my opinion. there's beauty in your pain! and it comes out as magic through your pen. keep writing - chintz
oops... went back 2 d poem n read dat u had written it much earlier....... i previously skipped that line. sorry... bt i still stick to wat i said.
arrey i dont mind... this poem is close to my heart becoz its like a beginning.
actually i think i am comfortable with pain and u r right there.
healthy criticism rather honest comments r welcome dear.
cheers
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