Sunday, March 12, 2006

Love


This poem was written way back in 1999 when i was in 11th standard.
Its kiddish but special. hope u enjoy it.

LOVE

Love to me lies in your deep eyes.
Love to me in your intense voice.
Love to me is in your affectionate pat.
Love to me is in your lively chat.
Love to me is in your smile so sweet.
Love to me is in your that mischievous peep.
Love to me is in your every action, sane and insane.
Love to me is in your concern for my gain and pain.
Love to me is in your care and nurture.
Love to me is in your untold promise of the future.
Love to me is lies in whatever you do.
Love to me is you and only you.

6 Comments:

Blogger Padma said...

nice...thts the way love to me is n last line "Love to me is you and only you."...apke liye hai true

9:05 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

oye tu bhi poetry-shoetry likh rahi hai!!!
good that u liked it.
u know at that time i hid my poems becoz thought they were childish.

11:44 PM  
Blogger Padma said...

mera toh ek hi philosophy hai, don't undestimate urself...aur mera poetry-shoetry hai toh pls....

2:43 PM  
Blogger jocklohm junction said...

maam no offence, but u express pain and suffering with such effortless flair..., whereas 4 this one, it looked like u wer searching for words... 4give me if u feel im wrong, bt thats just my opinion. there's beauty in your pain! and it comes out as magic through your pen. keep writing - chintz

10:21 PM  
Blogger jocklohm junction said...

oops... went back 2 d poem n read dat u had written it much earlier....... i previously skipped that line. sorry... bt i still stick to wat i said.

10:23 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

arrey i dont mind... this poem is close to my heart becoz its like a beginning.
actually i think i am comfortable with pain and u r right there.
healthy criticism rather honest comments r welcome dear.
cheers

6:29 PM  

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