Flexible dreams
Coming of a new year
reminds me of new dreams...
that by mid-year will be faded
and by december down and out
I see the beginning of an end...
a far-sighted perspective..huh?
Well, shedding the thin skin
full of ruptured arteries
Am pulling another dare-devilry
the guts to hope
for an already shattered dream
Tattered... with just an iota of spring
provided by strange stroke of luck...
Time-tested cynicism
versus pure refreshing perspective...
Have a big battle ahead
For now - I will keep
the promise
to dream a reality
reminds me of new dreams...
that by mid-year will be faded
and by december down and out
I see the beginning of an end...
a far-sighted perspective..huh?
Well, shedding the thin skin
full of ruptured arteries
Am pulling another dare-devilry
the guts to hope
for an already shattered dream
Tattered... with just an iota of spring
provided by strange stroke of luck...
Time-tested cynicism
versus pure refreshing perspective...
Have a big battle ahead
For now - I will keep
the promise
to dream a reality
4 Comments:
Hey...this is nice ...great start... flexible dreams... wo.. man....sure it is the begining of a year...and maybe just maybe...another poetic dream..which may transcend into a reality...coz hey someone out there...far away in a space called poetic license just echoed these eonian words " i will keep the promise to dream a reality".......these words will be remembered and iam sure cherished in the space out here too...
And hey.....you just exposed the wise man!!! i thought he was safe and protected..... but i guess you just manage to hack him....and i can see the wise man running!!!!!!...:-) :-) :-) anyways iam sure he will be back.....i need him though..
And hey read the break again....." half-sipped slant glass of bitter truths" and more ...... i savoured every bit of it...... keep churning more of them!!![ joy,pain,salvation, redemption,life,bliss,..anything],
and the nomad is gonna make sure that he aint gonna miss any of them...
And....ahhh too many "and's"... but gotta say this
Wishing you a awesome and a wonderful new year.....have fun!!!
ya..
thanx ya... u r missing from the circuit.. i wanna see more of u
i think we need the wise man back here...
dont tell me u r hibernating!
whats special about 'a break'? u know when i write i never really understand... and people have always told me that i have disjointed expressions and all this leads to a lot of confusion...
yes.. i wanna keep the promise to dream just reality...
i thought u would identify with 'a strange stroke of luck'..
huh?
take care... missing intellective psychosis... get back with a vengeance...
chow
"with just an iota of spring
provided a strange stroke of luck"..yes i guess i did identify yes i did...but then....you know...somethings are best left understood rather than spoken....i dont know, i hope i understood it in the right perspective...so let it be..let it be...
hmnnn as far confusion about your writings is concerned ...i have not experienced any so far...maybe i will let you know..when it actually happens...so lets leave the confusion alone...and as far as people are concerned ..all i can say is "to each one his own"
ahhh....circuit...i have never been part of any...and hibernation well maybe..a bit of it...
and anyways intellective psychosis is always at play...knows no boundaries...poetic license,does keeps it at play...dont you think so .....
and yes i shall avenge my Hibernation....
....but you keep those thoughts rolling....
Chow.....
actually ya u r right..
intellective psychosis is always at play...
strange na i feel our comments make for good poetry...
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