Saturday, December 22, 2007

You and Me

Vine-like embrace
Affecting my existence
Reaching the depths as I lie
Under your overpowering presence
No other thing touching me
If this is the only feeling I have
So be it... its my idea of contentment
Having known completeness... blending with you
Any other touch, any other world only seems incomplete...

2 Comments:

Blogger Nirvanicyogi said...

Hey.......had to take the u turn again.........wo man........and what do i find .........poetic licence has got a fresh set of thoughts........now this is interesting.......thoughts....i thought were what we are, but then to exist poetically is i guess i is sublime fun ............i guess i need to read every little bytes in this space.....sure i will.......but hey this is a feast of poetry.......chow

1:51 am  
Blogger dusky hues said...

actually...when i write i dont really think about any existence...
the thought overshadows everything else...

pain is the truth of life...so there's a lot of it in my poems...

keep commenting... have fun

11:02 pm  

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