Thursday, January 03, 2008

Beauty Revisited

Following the smooth flow
of your gaze...
watery with wonder...
And I wondered..
squinting to see if
there was any skirmish...
any blotch... any uncalled for
attention-seeking scar...

You continued with your exploration
resting your eyes on a soft tendril
swaying to the beats of a hard-metal loving wind
In one more sweep...
I was conscious
Of a sweet warm glow...

You took a look
and smiled to your self
mocking at me
'how can you be unaware of your glow?'

I squinted again... a happy squint
Feeling like a queen...
in the pupils of your eye
I felt the shower of heaven
in the soft touch of your gaze...

I feel beautiful

2 Comments:

Blogger Nirvanicyogi said...

In this insanical, parodoxical strange, wierd ,toxic, smoking world..... the beauty spot..is seen and revisited again ....wo...wo...man...thats quite a journey to have been taken ....the belief to see the awesome still remains...oblivious of the troubled era the life has been through....never mind the squint..
coz hey to the one who carries the belief of life i say.....it took a squinted effort to reach out now...but in moments of tommorow ..you shall look no further coz you would wake up to see yourself exist in the state of beauty ... yeah!!! you shall look no further...

I would like to quote these beautiful words "Time tested cynicism versus pure refreshing perspective " from the poetic license breathed by the one called the wishgirl.. coz hey these lines i guess fits in aptly here...coz its truly a pure refreshing perspective ....very nice very true.....
and yes it is beautiful............it truly is

And yes the wise man says he liked this one....and says go on!!!!

ok for the moment
Chow.....

11:31 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

hiiya..

the battle is done and won...
now its a brand new day and brand new way...
and yes thats the year's resolution.. thats the gift i gave myself...

i am seriously missing ur work... please do write something...thats our connect...
thank god at least, the wise man's back.. i thought i lost him after i exposed his true identity...

12:07 PM  

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