Monday, March 27, 2006

Passing days and Failing me

Life is forlorn
From the day you are gone
To distant worlds

Smile arrives, like once-a-year guest,
Only for some particular occasion.
Laughter, fair-weather friend, left
Without the faintest trace
Happiness now an alien…
Heard about but never really experienced.
Peace lies like ugly ruins
Of a deadly blast.
Living now is...
24*7, 365 days a year job.

The only weather I know
Is the never-ending all-pervading stillness
Of the afternoon air…
No changing hues, no dawn and dusk
No days and night
No seasons, no reasons…

Beating, breathing, blinking…
Passing days and failing me.


Blogger Nikxdave said...

Hello maam ..

Nice visiting your blog.. after a long time..

5:11 PM  
Blogger Mihir said...

i relate the title to our results... its really a nice poem... gr8 going maam...

6:44 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

hi niket,
great that u liked it. and hows life? i heard u having loads of fun. take care. cheers.
keep visiting.

9:09 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

hey mihir,
what do i say? wait n watch.
great that u loved the poem. keep visiting

9:10 PM  
Blogger chyrag said...

Nice... very... poetic...

9:10 AM  
Blogger nishwish said...

hi chyrag,
hows vietnam? take care.

9:02 PM  
Blogger ruhey said...

hi maam
i loved the poem...
sumthin abt it...
i m a person who njoys depressed emtional stuff...itz like romanticizing depression...

11:06 PM  
Blogger gambit said...

arey waah..kya poem hai? mere aankhon main aasoon aagaye..hehehe
ma'am, kya haal hai? mere blog pe bhi aaiye..


11:30 PM  
Blogger ~GiFt oF GoDhEaD~ said...

HI Ma'am.......
How r u?...
Sry i havnt been blogging 2 much or visiting other's either...
i hav no words to express how good ur poems r.....................
please keep blogging cz its very rejuvinating n inspiring to read ur poems n articles!

3:48 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

hi sye...
missed urs and chintz writings too. infact i asked him abt u... hows u dear?
great that u love my poems... trust me u all will be much better than me 5 years down the line... and guess who will be proud of this??

10:00 PM  
Blogger jocklohm junction said...

ha! im back 2 blogging (or atleast commenting)... finally. loved this one. there are some poems u write knowing that i'll love them, n i dont even need to tell u... still cudn't resist commenting. like this a lot. already read it thrice.
wassup maam!

10:09 PM  
Blogger nishwish said...

chintan me doing gud... obviously smiling to see u back at blogger's park...
missed u obviously..
great that u liked it.

6:26 PM  
Blogger HolySoul said...

Hi ma'am I must say thatthough I am not poetically inclined i really really loved your poems and felt like reading them. trust me they are really great... Why don't you just generally discuss these poems with us. It would be great if others would get to know about your work!!!


12:50 AM  
Blogger nishwish said...

hey renuka..
good that u loved my poem... but discussing them in class!!!
maybe we can have poetry circles and enjoy reading our poems and works.. what say?

8:54 PM  

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