Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Deformed

In my veiled existence
I let go of the last bit
of me in me...

With nothing to offer
I hastily hide and rush for cover
to prevent any familiar gaze to rest
on my unrecognisable self...

Instead of the happy laughter lines
that I always dreamt of...
Failure wrote ugly wrinkles
and left a bitter twist

Then,
Tail tucked under,
Love-hungry stray that I am
I run salivating in my mad pursuit
Leaving a soon-to-be forgotten story
for the world...
Oblivious to the pain of my blood
watching me insanely detached from reality...
Cursed with self-imposed deformity for life.

71 Comments:

Blogger Nirvanicyogi said...

ahh!! there you are........... I thought that the wishgirl was taking a long walk on the shores..soaking in the sands of life oblivious of the world beyond the sands...........
But then i guess a call from the world beyond the shores changed it all..... too bad an oblivious existence found itself veiled again
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hmnnn........i wish life could just be like those walks on the shore...on those sands... but those walks shall be realised again.... but for the moment the realisation is...vieldom...ugly wrinkles...pain...paranoia...... and yes "self-imposed deformity"......

at times i wonder is there a barrel of emotions out there waiting to be unleashed....well if it is then i guess poetic license is a must watch.....

Hey ...and my good old friend the wise man says "self-imposed deformity" is okay but for ever ,for life.....no says the wise man....just trip on it..deal with it...but dont keep it for life....

and yes fantastic lines...every line is formed well.....so there you go formity in deformity!!!

Ok....i know...i know....IP is been deserted for quite sometime..shall visit it very soon..

anyways...you keep writing...

Chow

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Blogger dusky hues said...

hey
nice to see u again...
well... the walk was just a detour from the road of detruction... now its back to pavilion...
i realised that after all the wish girl isn't all that strong

she has resigned to her torn fate... u know she wonders why we fail to give love to people who love us unconditionally and yearn, crave and die for the love of some uncaring people, who thrive by reducing us to nothing...

thats the deformity...

i would love to see the IP revived, you know the wishgirl is doing some tough thinking so i have left her alone for a while...

so then its a deal that in a few days (not above 3 please) i see a new blossom in IP...

how have u been? hope things are great... keep visiting...

chow

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